I like where you are headed with some of these sketches. I would like to see you settle on a name and explore ways to convey the idea through the naming convention and artistic possibilities.
It's a little tough to provide critical feedback as a lot of the titles go in different directions conceptually. Although, the one on the bottom left of page 2 stands out to me. Using the cross bars and cross strokes of the letters to create a stitch pattern was a very witty visual observation.
I definetly like Beauty or Moral Fiber. The shoe as the A in beauty is subtle but recognizable. But as the name I think Moral Fiber would convey fashion more than the title Beauty
I like where you are headed with some of these sketches. I would like to see you settle on a name and explore ways to convey the idea through the naming convention and artistic possibilities.
ReplyDeleteIt's a little tough to provide critical feedback as a lot of the titles go in different directions conceptually. Although, the one on the bottom left of page 2 stands out to me. Using the cross bars and cross strokes of the letters to create a stitch pattern was a very witty visual observation.
ReplyDeleteI'm a fan of the names "Swag Art" and "Moral Fiber." Good use of word plays!
ReplyDeleteI definetly like Beauty or Moral Fiber. The shoe as the A in beauty is subtle but recognizable. But as the name I think Moral Fiber would convey fashion more than the title Beauty
ReplyDelete"More than what it seams." done in a stitch is the one I would go with.
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